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Fandom 2002 Archive
- Fanfic...its sucks...
SunGoddessMia - 21 Sep 2002 11:53 am
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sucks...
I know this sucks, but i was incredibly bored and i had no clue what to do, so
umm.... This is about Harry MacDougall's little sister who is ssad because he
hates her for goin out with Gene, and used to love her, and was a little too
close. \
please....tell me i did good just a little....  
It's hard for me to think about what you do to me…
how much you hurt me…and how much you don't care about how I feel. You're my
brother, you're supposed to care. You did care before I started to go out with
that Gene Starwind guy.
I remember when you would touch me, and kiss me, I
would feel the warmth of your hands over my body, caressing my body as I
trembled beneath you.
'Sshh… I won't hurt you Riana, I wouldn't ever hurt
you, I'm your brother, don't worry about it…' you'd whisper in my ear, as you
would capture my ear between your teeth.
'Harry,' I'd whisper back, stroking
your long, soft hair. 'what if Ron comes back and sees us? I don't want to get
in trouble, you know what he'll do to me.'
'I'll be here with you now, I'm
not going to let him hurt you.' you'd whisper back, touching my face gently.
Your touch sent shivers up and down my spine, you'd feel my shivering body and
wrap your arms around me, telling me that I don't need to worry.
You would
slip your hands down into my tight leather shorts, pushing your fingers up into
me, as I moaned your name.
'Sh… be quiet… Ron will hear us… we don't want
that do we?' you'd ask me, moving your hands out of my shorts and licking your
fingers, smirking that adoring smirk that you know that I love. You'd pull off
my shorts and touch me, your warm hands making me shudder. You'd slowly pull off
your clothes and allow me to pull off your pants. I'd wrap my legs around you
and you would slide easily into me, your long, hard cock pushing against my
sweet spot. You knew where my sensitive spot was, and you took that advantage.
You'd hold my hips tight, you fingers squeezing into my skin, I was losing
control over myself, and I would climax, then fall back onto the couch. You
would lay on top of me stroking my hair, telling me things I want to hear.
Now its different, you hurt me, you yell at me, and everything… I'm sorry I
started to go with Gene, but I love him… I'm sorry Harry.
I know
its short, but its my first POV fic. (not really but hey.)
td yuy - 21 Sep 2002 12:27 pm
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oh.my.god. that was beautiful,a little sick,but wonderful nontheless.it was one
of the most beautiful fics i've ever read!!!! 
SunGoddessMia - 21 Sep 2002 06:59 pm
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thank you, I thought peeps would hate me for it... @.@
Deathsycthe_009 - 21 Sep 2002 07:03 pm
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it's good. But wouldn't it go under the catigory (please pardon my spelling) of
a lemon?
SunGoddessMia - 21 Sep 2002 07:06 pm
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yeah it would.....but um.....well... i guess thats what it could be rated.....
NC -17.....or R....or sumthin.... SOMEONE RATE IT FOR ME!!!!! 
Deathsycthe_009 - 21 Sep 2002 07:14 pm
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you should write for a fan-fiction website. I love reading them. 
SunGoddessMia - 21 Sep 2002 07:18 pm
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who me?? Nahhh...I'm not that good
Deathsycthe_009 - 21 Sep 2002 07:20 pm
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yeah you and the other people who write them here are. I have to type mine. I
have three hildexduo ones. Two fan-fictions and one lemon. But I'm too lazy and
too busy to type them.
SunGoddessMia - 21 Sep 2002 07:21 pm
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i don't think i could.... i mean.... should i put more fanfics up here or
sumthin???
Deathsycthe_009 - 21 Sep 2002 07:22 pm
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sure, but only if you wish to.
SunGoddessMia - 22 Sep 2002 03:47 pm
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well...as soon as i decide how many of mine are descent, then maybe i could... i
dunno
Gundam-Ranger-X - 22 Sep 2002 04:13 pm
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SunGoddessMia - 22 Sep 2002 04:19 pm
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UH UH BOY!!!*tackles GRX* are you making fun of this you little mutha
F*cka??????????!!!!!!!!!!!  
Gundam-Ranger-X - 24 Sep 2002 04:45 am
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No. I find this funny and sick att the same time. Kinda
like roten.com (don't go there, trust me)
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