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- The Holy Knight Asheron (Chapter 1 pt 1)
Berserk - 25 Jun 2003 10:16 pm
Post subject: The Holy Knight
Asheron (Chapter 1 pt 1)
well i kind of rushed this part becuase i wanted get to the part where I know
what I'm going to write, well hopefully a few of you will comment on it so I
know what type of changes I should make in the next few chapters. well anyway a
hint is Asheron's mood is completly going to change after a big event
Chapter 1 pt 1
In a time were Darkness overcomes all that is
good, A age of depair, weakness, death, uncertainty, one man has his fate change
from good to bad. He is the Holy Knight known as Asheron. He will try to
overcome
the darkness the of the world, the world he knew no longer exists
in this unceasing place taken over by God. The only thing pressing him forward
is the revenge he seeks upon the kingdom and God himself.
[one after
noon at at house]
Asheron: This damn battle is going to be a blood bath
if the king doesn't send his guards in.
Fiona: I'm just happy to have
you here
Ash: I don't care if . . . .
Fiona: If anything was to
happen to you I don't know what I would do.
[knock on the door]
Messanger: Asheron there is a asassin, the prince has been killed, you
must go to the castle where the sire is waiting for your protection.
Ash: I'll be right back Fiona, lock the doors and don't go anywhere.
[at the castle]
King Juitin: your saying I have to make a
sacrifice so my Kingdom will not fall
Unknown: all you have to do is
your part.
[disapears]
[Asheron enters]
Ash: Sire is
everything alright
[They both hear screams from the next room over]
Ash: hasn't anyone else of the Holy Knights come sire ?
Juitin:
if only they weren't at the battle field
Ash: why wasn't I told of this,
I AM THERE COMMANDER !!!!
[banging on the door, the door crashes down]
[5 asassins enter]
Ash (to himself) : what is going on here, why
wouldn't he tell me of this matter
asassins: we have come to kill you
Lord Juitin.
Ash (to himself): something doesn't seem quite right here
the king seems to be in a calm state even though the group of assasins stand
right infront of him
[asassins rush at Asheron and they all draw there
swords]
assasin leader: there is only one we can take him easily, all
attack at once
Ash: you really think I'll be that easy, I will not go
down until everyone of you are dead !!!!!!
[swords clash]
[Ash hits
the first asassin to come close to him and repells the next strike]
asassin leader: I TOLD YOU ALL TO ATTACK AT THE SAME TIME NOW GO !!!!
[all rush towards Ash]
[Ash takes down the first 2 but gets struck
by the 3 on his wrist]
asassin: boss i got him he won't be able to hold
onto his sword anymore with that wound.
Ash: heh
asassin boss:
look behind you, you fool never underestimate youropponent
[asassins
head roles infront of there leader]
asassin boss: looks like I'm going
to have to take care of you, don't think I'll be as easy as the rest of those
idiots
[assasin boss takes out a mace about 3X the regulare size of one]
[asassin hits Ash in his right leg]
[Ash falls to one knee]
Ash
(to himself) : maybe I shouldn't be so easy on this guy
[the Kings
soldiers show up to help Asheron]
Juitin: what are you doing you fools
!!!
[asassin boss takes down 5 of the kings soldiers in one swing of
his mace]
[Ash forces himself back on his feet]
Ash: stop he is to
good for you guys, step down,
i will be the one to finish this.
Asassin boss: you still think you can beat with those wounds you have,
ha you must be crazy.
[ash rushes toward the asassin boss jumps over his
attack and slashs his sword at him]
Ash: What I missed
Asassin:
you are a formidable opponent, why don't you join with us, and you will never
have to suffer.
Ash: never, you will face the same outcome as those who
have died before you
[Ash now grips the sword at goes to attack]
[Asassin starts to whip his mace at Ash but every attack is blocked]
Ash: this is the end !!
[Ash once again leeps over his attack
only to be block once more]
[Ash throws a dagger toward the asassin, and the
asassin falls to the ground]
Asassin: well . . . . it looks like this is
my last chance
[asassin grabs the dagger out of his chest and throws it at
Ash with his last breath]
[asassin boss dies]
[Ash is hit in the back
and falls to the ground and faints]
Juitin: why did this have to happen
now, he will come back, my kingdom,
what will happen to my kingdom.
END OF part 1
Sledgstone - 26 Jun 2003 10:26 pm
Post subject:
let me know when part two is up. i want to read them both at the same time.. i
wish i had more time to read. :\
wolflord - 03 Jul 2003 01:37 am
Post subject: Re: The Holy
Knight Asheron (Chapter 1 pt 1)
| Berserk wrote: |
well i kind of rushed this part becuase i wanted get to
the part where I know what I'm going to write, well hopefully a few of you
will comment on it so I know what type of changes I should make in the
next few chapters. well anyway a hint is Asheron's mood is completly going
to change after a big event
Chapter 1 pt 1
In a time
were Darkness overcomes all that is good, A age of depair, weakness,
death, uncertainty, one man has his fate change from good to bad. He is
the Holy Knight known as Asheron. He will try to overcome
the darkness
the of the world, the world he knew no longer exists in this unceasing
place taken over by God. The only thing pressing him forward is the
revenge he seeks upon the kingdom and God himself.
[one after noon
at at house]
Asheron: This damn battle is going to be a blood bath
if the king doesn't send his guards in.
Fiona: I'm just happy to
have you here
Ash: I don't care if . . . .
Fiona: If
anything was to happen to you I don't know what I would do.
[knock
on the door]
Messanger: Asheron there is a asassin, the prince has
been killed, you must go to the castle where the sire is waiting for your
protection.
Ash: I'll be right back Fiona, lock the doors and
don't go anywhere.
[at the castle]
King Juitin: your
saying I have to make a sacrifice so my Kingdom will not fall
Unknown: all you have to do is your part.
[disapears]
[Asheron enters]
Ash: Sire is everything alright
[They both hear screams from the next room over]
Ash:
hasn't anyone else of the Holy Knights come sire ?
Juitin: if only
they weren't at the battle field
Ash: why wasn't I told of this, I
AM THERE COMMANDER !!!!
[banging on the door, the door crashes
down]
[5 asassins enter]
Ash (to himself) : what is going on
here, why wouldn't he tell me of this matter
asassins: we have
come to kill you Lord Juitin.
Ash (to himself): something doesn't
seem quite right here the king seems to be in a calm state even though the
group of assasins stand right infront of him
[asassins rush at
Asheron and they all draw there swords]
assasin leader: there is
only one we can take him easily, all attack at once
Ash: you
really think I'll be that easy, I will not go down until everyone of you
are dead !!!!!!
[swords clash]
[Ash hits the first asassin to
come close to him and repells the next strike]
asassin leader: I
TOLD YOU ALL TO ATTACK AT THE SAME TIME NOW GO !!!!
[all rush
towards Ash]
[Ash takes down the first 2 but gets struck by the 3 on
his wrist]
asassin: boss i got him he won't be able to hold onto
his sword anymore with that wound.
Ash: heh
asassin boss:
look behind you, you fool never underestimate youropponent
[asassins head roles infront of there leader]
asassin
boss: looks like I'm going to have to take care of you, don't think I'll
be as easy as the rest of those idiots
[assasin boss takes out a
mace about 3X the regulare size of one]
[asassin hits Ash in his right
leg]
[Ash falls to one knee]
Ash (to himself) : maybe I
shouldn't be so easy on this guy
[the Kings soldiers show up to
help Asheron]
Juitin: what are you doing you fools !!!
[asassin boss takes down 5 of the kings soldiers in one swing
of his mace]
[Ash forces himself back on his feet]
Ash: stop
he is to good for you guys, step down,
i will be the one to finish
this.
Asassin boss: you still think you can beat with those wounds
you have, ha you must be crazy.
[ash rushes toward the asassin
boss jumps over his attack and slashs his sword at him]
Ash: What
I missed
Asassin: you are a formidable opponent, why don't you
join with us, and you will never have to suffer.
Ash: never, you
will face the same outcome as those who have died before you
[Ash
now grips the sword at goes to attack]
[Asassin starts to whip his
mace at Ash but every attack is blocked]
Ash: this is the end !!
[Ash once again leeps over his attack only to be block once more]
[Ash throws a dagger toward the asassin, and the asassin falls to the
ground]
Asassin: well . . . . it looks like this is my last chance
[asassin grabs the dagger out of his chest and throws it at Ash with
his last breath]
[asassin boss dies]
[Ash is hit in the back and
falls to the ground and faints]
Juitin: why did this have to
happen now, he will come back, my kingdom,
what will happen to my
kingdom.
END OF part 1 | great great, but there are some spelling mistakes. This is the
correct version.
Chapter 1 pt 1
In a time were Darkness
overcomes all that is good, An age of depair, weakness, death, uncertainty, one
man has his fate change from good to bad. He is the Holy Knight known as
Asheron. He will try to overcome
the darkness of the world, the world he
knew no longer exists in this unceasing place taken over by God. The only thing
pressing him forward is the revenge he seeks upon the kingdom and God himself.
[one after noon at Asheron's house]
Asheron: This damn battle is
going to be a blood bath if the king doesn't send his guards in.
Fiona:
I'm just happy to have you here
Ash: I don't care if . . . .
Fiona: If anything was to happen to you I don't know what I would do.
[knock on the door]
Messenger: Asheron there is an asassin, the
prince has been killed, you must go to the castle where the sire is waiting for
your protection.
Ash: I'll be right back Fiona, lock the doors and don't
go anywhere.
[at the castle]
King Juitin: your saying I have to
make a sacrifice so my Kingdom will not fall
Unknown: all you have to do
is your part.
[disapears]
[Asheron enters]
Ash: Sire is
everything alright
[They both hear screams from the next room over]
Ash: hasn't anyone else of the Holy Knights come sire ?
Juitin:
if only they weren't at the battle field
Ash: why wasn't I told of this,
I AM THEIR COMMANDER !!!!
[banging on the door, the door crashes down]
[5 asassins enter]
Ash (to himself) : what is going on here, why
wouldn't he tell me of this matter
asassins: we have come to kill you
Lord Juitin.
Ash (to himself): something doesn't seem quite right here
the king seems to be in a calm state even though the group of assasins stand
right in front of him
[asassins rush at Asheron and they all draw there
swords]
assasin leader: there is only one we can take him easily, all
attack at once
Ash: you really think I'll be that easy, I will not go
down until everyone of you are dead !!!!!!
[swords clash]
[Ash hits
the first asassin to come close to him and repells the next strike]
asassin leader: I TOLD YOU ALL TO ATTACK AT THE SAME TIME NOW GO !!!!
[all rush towards Ash]
[Ash takes down the first 2 but gets struck
by the 3 on his wrist]
asassin: boss i got him he won't be able to hold
onto his sword anymore with that wound.
Ash: heh
asassin boss:
look behind you, you fool never underestimate youropponent
[asassins
head roles infront of there leader]
asassin boss: looks like I'm going
to have to take care of you, don't think I'll be as easy as the rest of those
idiots
[assasin boss takes out a mace about 3X the regulare size of one]
[asassin hits Ash in his right leg]
[Ash falls to one knee]
Ash
(to himself) : maybe I shouldn't be so easy on this guy
[the Kings
soldiers show up to help Asheron]
Juitin: what are you doing you fools
!!!
[asassin boss takes down 5 of the kings soldiers in one swing of
his mace]
[Ash forces himself back on his feet]
Ash: stop he is to
good for you guys, step down,
i will be the one to finish this.
Asassin boss: you still think you can beat with those wounds you have,
ha you must be crazy.
[ash rushes toward the asassin boss jumps over his
attack and slashs his sword at him]
Ash: What I missed
Asassin:
you are a formidable opponent, why don't you join with us, and you will never
have to suffer.
Ash: never, you will face the same outcome as those who
have died before you
[Ash now grips the sword at goes to attack]
[Asassin starts to whip his mace at Ash but every attack is blocked]
Ash: this is the end !!
[Ash once again leeps over his attack
only to be block once more]
[Ash throws a dagger toward the asassin, and the
asassin falls to the ground]
Asassin: well . . . . it looks like this is
my last chance
[asassin grabs the dagger out of his chest and throws it at
Ash with his last breath]
[asassin boss dies]
[Ash is hit in the back
and falls to the ground and faints]
Juitin: why did this have to happen
now, he will come back, my kingdom,
what will happen to my kingdom.
I think that's it. Other then that.
Berserk - 06 Jul 2003 10:18 pm
Post subject:
ya i know I can't spell I don't know how i ever graduated high school 
End of Topic.
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