Wonderland
Archive - lies are transparent diesel - 30 Nov 2002 02:30 am Post subject: lies are
transparent
don't want your admiration wanna be modest in all accord rise above the
rest unnoticed you're in freefall - i'm your ripcord drop the infallible
meat which feeds the hungry and understand lies are transparent - i
can see right through you all.
Amadeus - 30 Nov 2002 09:15 am Post subject:
Nice one Although perhaps something earlier in the poem needs to rhyme with all to
make it flow better
diesel - 30 Nov 2002 11:40 am Post subject:
rhyme is over-rated td yuy - 03 Dec 2002 09:52 am Post subject:
nice
