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Wonderland
Archive - lies are transparent diesel - 30 Nov 2002 02:30 am Post subject: lies are transparent don't want your admiration wanna be modest in all accord rise above the rest unnoticed you're in freefall - i'm your ripcord drop the infallible meat which feeds the hungry and understand lies are transparent - i can see right through you all. Amadeus - 30 Nov 2002 09:15 am Post subject: Nice one Although perhaps something earlier in the poem needs to rhyme with all to make it flow better diesel - 30 Nov 2002 11:40 am Post subject: rhyme is over-rated td yuy - 03 Dec 2002 09:52 am Post subject: nice
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