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td yuy - 14 Dec 2002 08:54 pm
Post subject: Suicide
My darkened Heart,my darkened Soul
Beautifully devoured by your holly prayers
And now I sit,
And now I cry,
Hopelessly,hopelessly wondering Why!

Why did I seek you?
Why did I want you?
Why did I believe you?
Why did I need you!!

You who I will always love....

Need you like the air I breathe
Need you like the blood that pumps through my body,
The Blood that keeps me alive.
You,your body!
Your Mind and your Soul!!
I needed you more than I needed my mother!

You,who I loved!

The pain that I feel,the emotions I trust
The feelings I need and foolishly believe in.
Why do they torment me?
Your abuse!
It destroyed me,bit by bit.

It,wich I had loved,and needed to keep me alive!

Your stupid beliefs
Your stupid ideas
Your stupid punishments!!
They destroyed me...
slowly and painfully...
as I followed you,As I trusted you!
And now as I look down upon your bloody corpse,
I don't feel the slightest bit of guilt,
Nor do I feel the slightest bit of remorse for you.

Me who I loved with all my heart
Amadeus - 15 Dec 2002 11:18 am
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Nice one happy.gif icon2.gif icon2.gif

Could probably do without the !! bits though, but that's just my very very humble opinion.

For an 11yr old you write scarily vivid poetry.
Guyver - 16 Dec 2002 09:42 am
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great poetry as usual. u are the few ppl's poetry i read
lloyd - 17 Dec 2002 08:55 am
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cool.
td yuy - 17 Dec 2002 11:16 am
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thank you happy.gif
Allie - 19 Dec 2002 11:16 pm
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oh wow....i totally got emotionally into your poem...I LOVE IT!
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