Wonderland
Archive - Away Heir of Silence - 19 Dec 2002 10:41 pm Post subject: Away
Simple, useless little poem I wrote in my French II class...
I
close my eyes let it all slowly fade drifting 'way from the cries
and letting down my weight
I unclench my fists now giving way to
tears with bloody kerchief, I wipe my brow though my vision never clears
I let myself fall back into my dark abyss and as my sight doth
fade to black my fate is sealed with a kiss
Aroura - 19 Dec 2002 11:30 pm Post subject: That is an awsome
poem... I wish I could write that good...Heir of Silence - 21 Dec 2002 01:55 am Post subject:
Ha! You silly, beautiful person. You CAN write that well. It's just a matter of
inspiration (occasionally), and practice I have no special talent
Red Hot Holly - 21 Dec 2002 02:33 am Post subject:
You DO have talent! Lots of it!
Heir of Silence - 22 Dec 2002 01:31 am Post subject:
You do not pay attention to what I say Aroura - 22 Dec 2002 01:23 pm Post subject: Heh, thanks n.n I
guess I can be an ok writer at times... I also guess I down myself because
nobody really says much about the stuff I write or draw...(irl that
is)Heir of Silence - 22 Dec 2002 08:23 pm Post subject:
IRL....everybody either doesn't care, or will say 'amazing' to anything you show
them, because they're just that jolly good of a pal
Aroura - 22 Dec 2002 11:32 pm Post subject: *nods* So very
true... Of course it doesn't help when nobody's given me any constructive
critisim here either...