sandrock - 12 Feb 2003 10:11 pm
Post subject: a little poem by me
I cant sleep,I do not eat,
I can not work,I can not think,
my world's dark and gray.
I feel unwanted,I feel weak,
I feel in another world,
I feel broken.
I have no reson,I am alone,
I do not care,I do not feel,
I am gone.
by~me
PitViper33 - 13 Feb 2003 01:56 am
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...so sad. I'm no good with poetry stuff, but it seems pretty good to me.
Total Trinity - 13 Feb 2003 11:27 am
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I agree with pitviper, It is really good. I like it alot... I think that is because I can relate to it very easily
~Total Trinity~
Guyver - 13 Feb 2003 11:28 am
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i hope that is not true, im ur friend u ever need n e thing let me no,
cos ur not allone
Total Trinity - 13 Feb 2003 11:32 am
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A wise man once said... 'To be alone is to be strong'
Or, you could say that, 'In solitude, there is strength'
So lonelyness may not be a bad thing...
~Total Trinity~
Guyver - 13 Feb 2003 11:35 am
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Nobody wants to be allone according to usher in u got it bad
Saiel - 13 Feb 2003 07:44 pm
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| Guyver wrote: |
| Nobody wants to be allone according to usher in u got it bad |
I wouldn't exactly
compare Usher to a philosopher... Nice poem, Quatre...I hope if that really is how you're feeling it doesn't stay that way for much longer. :\
Aroura - 13 Feb 2003 09:19 pm
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It's really good, but sad
It makes you sound so depressed... I more cheerful times come for you
Azrael - 13 Feb 2003 09:24 pm
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Nice work. It sounds like you could use some Positive Vibes!!!
sandrock - 13 Feb 2003 09:57 pm
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yes..sadly it is how I'm feeling right now,hopefully it isnt gonig to stay...
Kiki - 13 Feb 2003 11:43 pm
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You can't compare Usher the philosopher with Ricky Martin and Cristina Aguilera!! Nobody wants to be lonely, nobody wants to cry. My body's longing to hold you, so bad it hurts inside... Anyways, it's really good, and don't be sad anymore. We're you're friends, and we'll take care of you.
Guyver - 14 Feb 2003 06:43 am
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| sandrock wrote: |
| yes..sadly it is how I'm feeling right now,hopefully it isnt gonig to stay... |
read my topic in random called evil, well the link n e way, it cheered me up during ICT class
wolflord - 15 Feb 2003 12:40 am
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well my v-day sucked, but if u have any problems, my good firend mairi cvan hwelp. i swear she made me feel alot better, even tho i is ticked cuz i didnt get to dance with carolyn.
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