Anime Pimp - 26 Jan 2003 11:00 pm
Post subject: Plight of the Poet
Plight of the Poet
Wishes and dreams on an ocean redeemed
in the ebb and flow of the tide.
On restless waters of courses uncharted,
where the words of a poet reside.
Uncompassed direction, unattended reflections
adrift alone on the blue.
Unsearching, though seeking and blindly believing,
then stumbling upon the truth.
The words are profound and wisdom abounds
from the gates of heaven and hell.
Unknown to the reader, the poet, the teacher,
is truly a student as well.
Comments? Agree or disagree?
Saiel - 26 Jan 2003 11:31 pm
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I...really like it. It's very true...and it's simply...beautiful. I can't think of any criticism to make it better.
Ladywriter - 27 Jan 2003 10:56 am
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i think its tits the way it is
Total Trinity - 28 Jan 2003 11:07 am
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I love this Poem!! It is one of the most beautiful poems I have heard in a long time. But I have one question... 'i think its tits the way it is' Is that what you meant to say???
I really got confused...
~Total Trinity~
Anime Pimp - 28 Jan 2003 08:48 pm
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Aroura - 29 Jan 2003 11:46 am
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Cool
I like it.
Although if you were going for a rhyme scheme you messed up in the second
paragraph with blue and truth...
Azrael - 29 Jan 2003 12:02 pm
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That happens a lot when something comes close and just fits better. If you notice, a lot of songs have that kind of pseudo-rhyme going.
Aroura - 29 Jan 2003 08:36 pm
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Yeah, a sliding rhyme. I just thought I would mention it n.n
Kiki - 29 Jan 2003 11:13 pm
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I've always personally been fond of the every other line rhyme scheme... it makes me happy. Very gorgeous darling, very gorgeous.
dark_templer_102 - 29 Jan 2003 11:30 pm
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great job man....
i don't understand how u guys can write such good poems...if i brought my tecaher here she would faint....
Anime Pimp - 30 Jan 2003 10:59 pm
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Everything in the poem was put there for a reason.
Many thanks for the compliments.
Fate - 10 Mar 2003 05:52 pm
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simply beautiful
Me: LOOK over there!!! a giant Plushi!!!
AP: Where?!?!
*grabs poem and runs*
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