Saiel - 15 Mar 2003 02:09 pm
Post subject: Acrostic
(They were doin' acrostics in Creative Writing a few weeks ago, so I decided to do one just for fun...this form was always kinda neat to work with. So I just found this the other day while cleanin' out my bookbag. ^_^...btw, the last line is supposed to be out of form.)
Hoping you're not
Optimistic
Praying for some
Explanation
Leaving my feelings
Extended
Sitting upon my
Sighs
Listening alert for
You
Drowning in possible
Reservations
Unveiling my secret
News
Keep my heart for a beat
Total Trinity - 15 Mar 2003 03:26 pm
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Wow! That is really cool. I like the picture it puts in my head. I enjoy reading poetry that has the ability to put any picture in my head.
~Total Trinity~
Azrael - 15 Mar 2003 06:30 pm
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Ok. The poem's pretty
cool, but first impression, that's the funniest word I've ever seen for an
acrostic.
Heir of Silence - 15 Mar 2003 06:34 pm
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Phrase, rather, but yes
Kiki - 15 Mar 2003 08:41 pm
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I know. I was expecting 'Hopelessly in love' or 'hopeless romantic' Nothing about drunkenness.
Ladywriter - 16 Mar 2003 01:33 pm
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i think its kool
Saiel - 16 Mar 2003 01:38 pm
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Well...you could be drunk on love, couldn't you? ^_~;;;
Thanks for the compliments, though.
Total Trinity - 16 Mar 2003 01:59 pm
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| Azrael wrote: |
|
Ok. The poem's pretty cool, but first impression, that's the funniest word
I've ever seen for an acrostic. |
| Heir of Silence wrote: |
| Phrase, rather, but yes |
Neither a phrase of a word but a couple of words... LOL. j/k It is a phrase.
Anime Pimp - 19 Mar 2003 01:02 am
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I remember doing one of those for an in-class essay I was supposed to write on the Cold War.
I loved that class.
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