Noin - 24 Mar 2003 05:48 am
Post subject: Once in a Blue Moon
nah, that's not really the title. it sounds cool though.
I know what you must be thinking..
Noin.. writes??? stuff?? *gasp* I thought you only like to draw..
Well, I thought so too. This isn't as great as all your works
but hey, at least i tried to write an imagery paragraph for once.
here it goes..
rain.
i was about finished getting ready to go to school when i looked out of my room's faded window. mist surrounded my eyes level of view from the other side of the glass. as i opened my room door to go to my house's small backyard, my nose was hinted the smell of morning dew. fresh rain, i thought to myself. no wonder i was freezing the night before. i began to walk on the paved brick outdoor floor. i felt peaceful and calm. how odd. i seemed to be enjoying damp weather that others would not want. my leather school shoes lost friction and i almost fell. i waved my arms around to regain some balance. that was when my head motioned downwards instantly. i saw that the ground was damp and little pools of water had been formed overnight. my shoes had become soaked. i had gotten slpashes of muck all over my white cotton ankle socks. it was not a good sight, i wouldn't want anybody to notice how careless i can be. i continued to look around as the wind started to blow stronger and it had begun to sprinkle lightly. the soil was more than damp. i reacted by giving a little grin knowing that i was one chore less today. my nose was starting to get stuffy and blocked. i decided to head back
end.
p.s.
you may all begin to mock me now.
*hides in shame
*
Eli - 24 Mar 2003 11:09 am
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nooo its good ^^ paints the whole picture perfectly.
Saiel - 25 Mar 2003 02:19 am
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Yeah, don't be so unsure...it was very easy to follow along and see everything you were saying. Nice job.
Allie - 28 Mar 2003 12:42 am
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yayness i love it ^____^
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