Wonderland
Archive 2 - Once in a Blue Moon Noin - 24 Mar 2003 05:48 am Post subject: Once in a Blue Moon
nah,
that's not really the title. it sounds cool though. I know what you must be
thinking.. Noin.. writes??? stuff?? *gasp* I thought you only like to draw..
Well, I thought so too. This isn't as great as all your works but hey,
at least i tried to write an imagery paragraph for once.
here it goes..
rain.
i was about finished getting ready to go to school
when i looked out of my room's faded window. mist surrounded my eyes level of
view from the other side of the glass. as i opened my room door to go to my
house's small backyard, my nose was hinted the smell of morning dew. fresh rain,
i thought to myself. no wonder i was freezing the night before. i began to walk
on the paved brick outdoor floor. i felt peaceful and calm. how odd. i seemed to
be enjoying damp weather that others would not want. my leather school shoes
lost friction and i almost fell. i waved my arms around to regain some balance.
that was when my head motioned downwards instantly. i saw that the ground was
damp and little pools of water had been formed overnight. my shoes had become
soaked. i had gotten slpashes of muck all over my white cotton ankle socks. it
was not a good sight, i wouldn't want anybody to notice how careless i can be. i
continued to look around as the wind started to blow stronger and it had begun
to sprinkle lightly. the soil was more than damp. i reacted by giving a little
grin knowing that i was one chore less today. my nose was starting to get stuffy
and blocked. i decided to head back
end.
p.s. you may all
begin to mock me now. *hides in shame *
Eli - 24 Mar 2003 11:09 am Post subject:
nooo its good ^^ paints the whole picture perfectly.
Saiel - 25 Mar 2003 02:19 am Post subject:
Yeah, don't be so unsure...it was very easy to follow along and see everything
you were saying. Nice job. Allie - 28 Mar 2003 12:42 am Post subject:
yayness i love it ^____^
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