Saiel - 25 Mar 2003 02:16 am
Post subject: Man, this really kinda sucks.
(I think sometimes ya just gotta write something worthless to get it outta yer system...I hope.
Wrote it with
nothing better to do, at all...and in total boredom...and yes, it really does
suck. Whoopsie.) Sitting near the edge of the Earth, I'm thinking, what is the point of it all?
Sitting near the top of the world, I'm guessing, if I look down I'll probably fall.
The nearest I've gotten to heaven or hell
Is sitting inside of myself.
Sometimes the facts that I pull out my ass
Are really just visions of guilt.
All in it all I'm just drinking and trying
Not to screw up all that bad.
All in it all I'm just wishing for something
To pull me outside of the sad.
Wishing and drinking while
Sitting and thinking
It all seems such trivial shit.
Moaning and groaning while
Bitching and missing
I'm losing myself to what's 'in'.
We're trying not to think
Or to look too far in
For fear that we might miss it all.
It's all just a game
If you lose, you're to blame
For not catching yourself in the fall.
So you've stopped looking in
And you've given up trying
'Cause you're screwed if you do,
If you don't…
Maybe you're right
Or maybe you're blind
Or maybe they're all
Just the same…
Sitting near the edge of the Earth, I'm thinking, why are you here next to me?
Sitting near the top of the world, I'm guessing, if I shove--you'll just cease to be.
Eli - 25 Mar 2003 02:21 am
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i like!!
Anime Pimp - 25 Mar 2003 08:59 pm
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That was good! =O
You wouldn't have posted it if you thought it was bad, silly.
Saiel - 26 Mar 2003 02:48 am
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Well, thanks to both of you...
And Pimpy: Maybe so...but...the predominant thought is still, 'This is crap.'
dark_templer_102 - 26 Mar 2003 10:39 am
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ohhh....thats really good....and serious...i think
sandrock - 26 Mar 2003 09:06 pm
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I like it
Azrael - 26 Mar 2003 10:10 pm
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It's actually a lot like something I would write...of course, there's a reason I've never posted my stuff.
Saiel - 27 Mar 2003 01:10 am
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Ouch, Azzie. Very ouch.
(You should post
somethin' sometime, though. 
) And thanks to Quatre and DT.
Kiki - 29 Mar 2003 12:35 am
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Oooh... I like the second line... very powerful....
Saiel - 29 Mar 2003 01:04 am
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Yay...thanks, Ikki.
Fate - 31 Mar 2003 10:08 pm
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very nice!
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