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Wonderland
Archive 2 - Love G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 11:13 am Post subject: Love Love is the bringer, Of many a thing. New girls, old guys, Wedding bells ring. Most people know, What I quote about. The truth about love, Not what it's cracked up about. Love is shining, Brimming with hope. Bringing two lovers together, So they may elope. Love is a teaser, A twister of tears. A seductress of sorrow, That brings out your fears. Love is a shrink, That brings out troubles. Finds all the problems, And helps you out double. Though I preach of things, I may never know. I pray for that one girl, Though she may never show. Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:31 pm Post subject: Love is a teaser, A twister of tears. A seductress of sorrow, That brings out your fears. is my fave verse nice poem G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 02:46 pm Post subject: Thanxs. I may think I have out done my self on this one Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:51 pm Post subject: yeah, really nce, i realy go th this forum part, so be prowed G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 02:53 pm Post subject: *Smiles* Hehe... *Evil Mandark Laugh* Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:56 pm Post subject: cool banner to u got skillz G Maxter - 14 Apr 2003 01:50 pm Post subject: Not really. I didn't make that one. But thanx for the complement . Noin - 14 Apr 2003 07:38 pm Post subject:
same here. your simplicity is cool. G Maxter - 15 Apr 2003 10:31 am Post subject: Arigato tomadaichi. (that's thanxs friend in Japanese) Save the Fuzzles! Total Trinity - 19 Apr 2003 09:16 am Post subject: You is Crazy, G! *Saves a few fuzzles* Kaede - 23 Apr 2003 02:58 am Post subject:
The poem is great if focused on the words alone. Nice attempt at a rhyme scheme, but the flow of it seems iffy if read aloud. G Maxter - 30 Apr 2003 01:39 pm Post subject: I know. I know. But is ok. I guess *sigh* Total Trinity - 30 Apr 2003 02:24 pm Post subject: Hey, I think the rhyme scheme is gr8. It isn't forced. I like it. darkangleofdeath - 04 May 2003 04:55 pm Post subject: too real butt all to true cool
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