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Wonderland
Archive 2 - Love
G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 11:13 am
Post subject: Love
Love is the bringer,
Of many a thing.
New girls, old guys,
Wedding
bells ring.
Most people know,
What I quote about.
The truth
about love,
Not what it's cracked up about.
Love is shining,
Brimming with hope.
Bringing two lovers together,
So they may elope.
Love is a teaser,
A twister of tears.
A seductress of sorrow,
That brings out your fears.
Love is a shrink,
That brings out
troubles.
Finds all the problems,
And helps you out double.
Though I preach of things,
I may never know.
I pray for that one
girl,
Though she may never show.
Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:31 pm
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Love is a teaser,
A twister of tears.
A seductress of sorrow,
That
brings out your fears.
is my fave verse
nice poem
G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 02:46 pm
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Thanxs. I may think I have out done my self on this one 
Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:51 pm
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yeah, really nce, i realy go th this forum part, so be prowed 
G Maxter - 03 Apr 2003 02:53 pm
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*Smiles* Hehe... 
*Evil Mandark Laugh*
Guyver - 03 Apr 2003 02:56 pm
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cool banner to
u got skillz
G Maxter - 14 Apr 2003 01:50 pm
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Not really. I didn't make that one. But thanx for the complement  .
Noin - 14 Apr 2003 07:38 pm
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| Guyver wrote: |
Love is a teaser,
A twister of tears.
A seductress
of sorrow,
That brings out your fears.
is my fave verse
nice poem |
same
here.
your simplicity is cool.
G Maxter - 15 Apr 2003 10:31 am
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Arigato tomadaichi. (that's thanxs friend in Japanese) Save the Fuzzles!
Total Trinity - 19 Apr 2003 09:16 am
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You is Crazy, G! *Saves a few fuzzles*
Kaede - 23 Apr 2003 02:58 am
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| Noin wrote: |
your simplicity is
cool. |
The
poem is great if focused on the words alone. Nice attempt at a rhyme scheme, but
the flow of it seems iffy if read aloud.
G Maxter - 30 Apr 2003 01:39 pm
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I know. I know. But is ok. I guess *sigh*
Total Trinity - 30 Apr 2003 02:24 pm
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Hey, I think the rhyme scheme is gr8. It isn't forced. I like it.
darkangleofdeath - 04 May 2003 04:55 pm
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too real butt all to true cool 
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