Khellendross - 09 Dec 2002 08:04 pm
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welcome to hell youve been here before
you see it everytime you walk out the door
the world has ended my greatest fear
is of losing you while you're so near
the life has ended my soul destroyed
the world dont care its what i deserve
the pain of loss is my main theme
what else could all this be but a dream
no man deserves what i have got
but i take it gladly knowing just what,
she is happy, thats all that matters
the world is over... my beautiful flower.
mmk... so its not exactly the most encourageing poem in the world... but who likes it?
dark_templer_102 - 09 Dec 2002 08:07 pm
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its cool, but its not the best poem for self-essteam
Gundam-Ranger-X - 09 Dec 2002 09:52 pm
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It is better to have loved and lossed than to have never loved at all.
Heir of Silence - 09 Dec 2002 10:39 pm
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lossed? I misunderestimated your vocabulary!
dark_templer_102 - 09 Dec 2002 10:58 pm
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lol
Heir of Silence - 09 Dec 2002 11:54 pm
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Ph33r the c0m1ng 0f the m0st m15C0N5TRU3d u53 0f 3ngl1sh s1nc3 L337speek.....Bushspeak! They misunderestimated me!
Azrael - 09 Dec 2002 11:59 pm
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Now, if you're going to be unamericanlike like that, you're going to have some big problems with the green water on the other side. *sage look*
Heir of Silence - 10 Dec 2002 12:04 am
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Nader can speak decent English
Azrael - 10 Dec 2002 12:16 am
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Wasn't talking about Nader though. I've seen Bush mangle sayings like that before, although I forgot exactly what he said. I'm sure you could find it somewhere.
Heir of Silence - 10 Dec 2002 12:46 am
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I knew you weren't talking about Nader. Actually, there are 2 or so books about the subject and quotations thereof. 'Bushisms- the accidental wit and wisdom of George W. Bush'
Khellendross - 10 Dec 2002 02:58 am
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going off topic in meh topic? ill kill ye all!!!
besides, its one i wrote for losing someone a long time ago so
Mecca - 10 Dec 2002 03:15 am
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It's a lie, it's never better to have loved and lost. I'd much rather to have never loved at all. I'd rather not know that strong of emotions only to get dragged down in the end... but I'm what they call a pessimist.
Khellendross - 10 Dec 2002 05:26 am
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| Mecca wrote: |
| It's a lie, it's never better to have loved and lost. I'd much rather to have never loved at all. I'd rather not know that strong of emotions only to get dragged down in the end... but I'm what they call a pessimist. |
so true... (and im not a pessimist... pessimists are better than me... i have no outlook for the world at all)
Gundam-Ranger-X - 10 Dec 2002 06:27 am
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| Mecca wrote: |
| I'd much rather to have never loved at all. I'd rather not know that strong of emotions only to get dragged down in the end... but I'm what they call a pessimist. |
You've obviously loved, therefore you can not know the pain of always beeing alone and seeing couples everywhere you turn.
Eli - 10 Dec 2002 01:44 pm
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Bullshit GRX...god i would kill you right now. you have no idea. im leavin this topic real damn fast before i get banned.
Khellendross - 10 Dec 2002 06:58 pm
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| Gundam-Ranger-X wrote: | ||
You've obviously loved, therefore you can not know the pain of always beeing alone and seeing couples everywhere you turn. |
grx... repeat something like that around me again... and you'll regret it... i promise.
dark_templer_102 - 10 Dec 2002 08:25 pm
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whoa.........um when did ya make this
Total Trinity - 17 Jan 2003 02:18 pm
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I love your poem. It totally rox. I am somewhat of a poet myself, so I think I'm a pretty good judge. Nice job.
Sincerely, Total Trinity
Heir of Silence - 18 Jan 2003 11:07 pm
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Arrogant little snipe, aren't you?
Fate - 21 Jan 2003 04:17 pm
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Its a great peom and I like the first 2 stanzas!!
but the last one (to me anyway) doesn't really flow...
I think its between the 'what' and 'she is happy'
*ducks quickly out of the room to avoid thrown objects*
darkangleofdeath - 10 May 2003 07:29 pm
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i like it cool
Saiel - 10 May 2003 10:18 pm
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| Heir of Silence wrote: |
| Arrogant little snipe, aren't you? |
Ditto that. Damn.
But, very nice poem, Khell. For some reason, I read it to the tune of a Metallica song.
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