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Wonderland
Archive 2 - dreamer darkangleofdeath - 26 Apr 2003 02:17 pm Post subject: dreamer your eyes are like the stars above, you may be the only one i truly love, as the clouds in the sky go by & time flys, i can only emagine another place, wher i can always see your face, &where our love is bound & may only here true love can be spoken but never broken darkangleofdeath - 04 May 2003 04:25 pm Post subject: sorry cant spell worth shit darkangleofdeath - 10 May 2003 03:36 pm Post subject: hey im not that bad am i? Kaede - 10 May 2003 11:12 pm Post subject: in terms of the poem or the spelling? Saiel - 12 May 2003 11:10 pm Post subject:
Irony Makes me Smile Anyhoo, the rhyme scheme confuses me...but I think it has 'good poem' potential...especially since the 2nd verse improves upon the 1st, in my opinion. So if that continued...well, then damn. darkangleofdeath - 09 Jun 2003 06:05 pm Post subject: ouch that hurts Saiel - 09 Jun 2003 08:08 pm Post subject: Sorry...personal opinion. And I never want people to just tell me they like my work if they really could be giving helpful criticism. :\
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