Wonderland
Archive 2 - dreamer darkangleofdeath - 26 Apr 2003 02:17 pm Post subject: dreamer
your eyes are like the stars above, you may be the only one i truly love,
as the clouds in the sky go by & time flys,
i can only emagine
another place, wher i can always see your face, &where our love is
bound & may only here true love can be spoken but never broken
darkangleofdeath - 04 May 2003 04:25 pm Post subject:
sorry cant spell worth shit
darkangleofdeath - 10 May 2003 03:36 pm Post subject:
hey im not that bad am i?
Kaede - 10 May 2003 11:12 pm Post subject:
in terms of the poem or the spelling?
Saiel - 12 May 2003 11:10 pm Post subject:
Total Trinity wrote:
Check you spelling.
Irony Makes me Smile
Anyhoo, the
rhyme scheme confuses me...but I think it has 'good poem' potential...especially
since the 2nd verse improves upon the 1st, in my opinion. So if that
continued...well, then damn. darkangleofdeath - 09 Jun 2003 06:05 pm Post subject:
ouch that hurts Saiel - 09 Jun 2003 08:08 pm Post subject:
Sorry...personal opinion. And I never want people to just tell me they like my
work if they really could be giving helpful criticism. :\
