Heir of Silence - 21 Jan 2003 12:16 am
Post subject: Panic.
MUWAHAHAHA
HoS wrote this! HoS write insane!
Feel~ PANIC
look left look right
blink twice run dont look
behind you no time
run stop dodge
PANIC
focus no focus harsh
grating sound hateful
run back now forward
EYES WIDE OPEN
PANIC
heart beating pounding
dying feeling death approaching
no feeling but paranoia
beating in my skull fast
PANIC
Heart slowing- fading without hoping
Eyes closing- too tired to stay open
Blood flowing- crimson on the tile floor
Life dying- Please, darling, let me live some more?
Azrael - 21 Jan 2003 12:20 am
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Cool. I think '
PANIC
' is a little too emphatic though.
(I'm gonna feel really stupid if that's the wrong word.)
Fate - 21 Jan 2003 03:54 pm
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me like!!!
Heir of Silence - 22 Jan 2003 08:29 pm
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This wasn't supposed to be a serious poem. I was like 'hmm...I should write a poem...I'll just go with whatever comes to my head' and the idea spun off of thinking about thinking fast
psycho_kitty - 22 Jan 2003 08:33 pm
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*pokestabpoke*
Saiel - 22 Jan 2003 08:40 pm
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| Heir of Silence wrote: |
| This wasn't supposed to be a serious poem. I was like 'hmm...I should write a poem...I'll just go with whatever comes to my head' and the idea spun off of thinking about thinking fast |
I can see that...the faster you read it, the better it sounds.
Heir of Silence - 22 Jan 2003 09:21 pm
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It's definitely not a read-by-a-relaxing-fire type of poem
td yuy - 24 Jan 2003 11:49 am
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Its BEAUTIFUL!!I love it. HoS you are the best poet I know.
Total Trinity - 24 Jan 2003 04:17 pm
Post subject: Shway...
HoS, That is by far the best quick-write poem that I have ever read in all my years of poetry... It totally rox!! I LOVE IT!! At first I read it slow, then really fast... It sounds better fast... I just have to say that I now have something else to try... I have never tried quick-write... But now I'm gonna... I cannot even hope to have it be that good. It is totally Shway!
~Total Trinity~
Heir of Silence - 25 Jan 2003 02:43 pm
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Awww, thank you
*feels massively loved*
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