Shadow Gundam - 18 Feb 2003 11:24 pm
Post subject: a story By ME
The Vow
By: Nick Worth
Part 1 of ?
Four days, it’s been four days since it happened. What happened you may ask. I’ll tell you what happened. It was sunny day on Pirate Isle my family and me were going on a walk looking for wild Blackberries when they came. Who? You may ask. Well I’ll tell you. The Black Rouges! The black rouges are a band of nomads stealing from towns after they’ve killed the inhabitants. Few survive the ordeal. As we entered the town we saw fire, smoke, and corpses all around. We were lucky the didn’t see us till we got to our home. My father a former Solider of the Red Stryks still had his Blade. He went out to face the Black Rouges, he told my mother and I to run while he and my two older brothers: Perry and Jorge went to fend off the rouges. As we were leaving the village two scouts entered they passed us not realizing whom we were. They turned and shouted “Stop or I’ll slay you both!” we just sprinted into the forest but before we could enter an arrow took my mother threw the chest she staggered and fell I knew she was dead by the look in her eyes they were clouded and gray. I ran for my life I ran and I ran till I could run no more. For two days I hid in the forest many a time I saw rouges search for me. After a while I knew it was safe so I entered my destroyed village. Carcasses of Slain Rouges were scattered around the bodies of my brothers and father I was saddened to learn my Father and Brother were slain defending my mother and I. It was then I took up my Fathers Sword and Vowed Revenge on the Black Rouges!
Its not very long but its a start. Any comments? *coughgoodonescough*
biobrolly - 12 Aug 2003 12:24 am
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sounds cool...it sounds a little like the begining of pirates of the
carrabiane but it still sounds interesting.post the rest when yer done
Ladywriter - 12 Aug 2003 08:31 am
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how much more ya got?
shadowX - 13 Aug 2003 03:49 pm
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sounds aswome
..i cant wate till ya finish it 
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