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Wonderland
Archive - Bus Stop Saiel - 22 Jan 2003 07:00 pm Post subject: Bus Stop ~I wrote this with restrictions I set on myself. It's not one of my favorites that I've done, but it is the most recent.~ Bus Stop I meant to ask a question just now Instead, I let my feelings slip (Oops.) Maybe if you didn't annoy me so much I'd keep my mouth shut more (Ouch.) I don't need you--that was a joke Instead, I need a little break (Really.) Maybe you should stop crying now, little boy I'd like a dry shirt later (But.) I wasn't trying to hurt you, ya know Instead of how it seems now (Um.) Maybe I should just get it over with I'd be better off that way (Sure.) I thank you for being my boyfriend's understudy Instead of running away in terror (Whatever.) Maybe everything will go smoothly now, after this I'd hate to dirty my hands (Help?) I suppose we should part ways about now Instead of us becoming all chummy (Alleluia.) Maybe we'll meet again after I've done it I'd hate to leave you hanging (Weirdo.) ~So, the restrictions were...8 words to each first line, 6 words to each second, and 1 word to the third. The odd stanzas first line begin with I and the second line with Instead...the even stanzas first line begin with Maybe and second with I'd. Tell me what you think.~ Heir of Silence - 22 Jan 2003 08:35 pm Post subject: I'm moderately befuddled Saiel - 22 Jan 2003 08:37 pm Post subject: Yay! That seems to be the consensus conclusion so far. Aroura - 23 Jan 2003 07:50 pm Post subject: I like the way it's writen, very interesting n.n Total Trinity - 28 Jan 2003 11:28 am Post subject: I agree, Aroura. I too like the way it is written. ~Totla Trinity~ ---I am no longer worthy of love.
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